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如何深入剖析雅思大作文

2016-10-09 12:54:54 来源:北外网课

  雅思大作文话题多样,如教育类,科技类,环境类,法律类等等。面对如此的话题,想必有些考生已经应付不来了,不管有多难,考生都要坚持,掌握方法去攻克它。本文北外网课小编为大家带来的是雅思大作文话题深入剖析,主要是科技类与教育类,然后是一篇范文赏析。希望考生能够从中有所收获。
  一、大作文话题类型
  雅思大作文话题类别较多,每个话题下面又会细分成若干个题目,这就使得难度在一定程度上加大。
  其中,科技类话题通常会涉及到科技的优缺点,科技对生活的影响,科技产品的优劣势,或是与其他话题的相互联系等等;教育类话题一般会提及小学/中学/大学等教育阶段的相关内容,或是教育方式,如素质教育,分组学习等。
  上面只是给大家罗列出了几个小点,事实上,每个话题所包含的题目涉及的面还是比较广的,要想在短时间内突破还是有一定难度的。
  二、话题思路分析步骤:
  以教育类话题为例:In order to fuel the development and progress of the country, people think that the government money should be invested to teaching science rather than other subjects. To some extent do you agree or disagree?
  通过分析,我们知道该题属于观点类,也就是说考生对题目中观点,即为了国家的发展和进步,政府应该向理科学科上多进行资金投入而不是其他学科,在某种程度上同意或不同意。而且,我们也可以知道题目关键词是政府、理科、其他学科。在分析之后,我们就可以运用之前所讲到的主题分析法来分析该题。
  从国家方面来讲的话,好处是科技的发展与创新能够在很大程度上促进国家经济的发展;从组织方面来说的话,为了保持自身的竞争优势和利润,不断研发是一个公司保持的原动力。
  除了这两个方面之外,考生还可以加入其他的例子,以便增强文章的说服力。
  三、高分范文赏析
  题目:
  Governments are more responsible for scientific research than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
  范文:
  首段:
  Living today in the golden age of technology, scientific research has been a more crucial link in social development. (背景句)However, there is a controversial issue that between governments and private companies, who exactly should assume more responsibilities for scientific research and technology innovation.(引出话题) I believe that it is governments that should bear greater shares. (给出自己的观点)
  完成时,定语从句与强调句的应用,
  主体段一:
  To begin with, common sense informs me most every government should undertake the basic obligation to ensure a better life for its citizens because every cent of the government revenue is from the people. (**个分论点,国家有权利) In other words, taxes paid by people should also be used on people.(解释性论证) As long as one nation’s scientific research is for the best of the public in perfecting the public facilities and enhancing national security, it is the mission of the “public servants ” to invest more to level up the wellbeing of the people.
  主体段二:
  Subsequently, not only should the government be more obliged to do so, they are also more capable compared to non-government agencies. (第二个分论点,国家有能力)Governments hire dominant experts from the relevant fields and harness the most advanced equipment for research. (解释性论证)Thus, the ability to pool and dominant various resources makes the government superior to (对比论证)private companies. (总结句)
  主体段三:
  However, this is not to say that private companies have nothing to do with scientific research. (让步用法)In fact, some of the most welcomed products are developed by private corporations such as the I Phone by Apple(举例论证). Researches are done more efficiently by private companies because they are profit driven.
  结尾段:
  In conclusion, from my point of view, governments absolutely should undertake greater than private companies, yet the more significant point is haw to combine both. Hardly can one nation’s scientific progress take lead in the world without cooperated efforts between governments, private companies. (总结,二者相结合)
  对于范文的写作手法,词汇及句式的应用,结构的搭建,让步段的使用等等,考生都能有很大的收获,对于备考大作文考试有着不可忽略的作用。考生在平时可以多多参考高分范文,吸收其精华,并为其所用。
  以上就是雅思大作文话题深入剖析的详细内容,写出一篇高质量的作文并非易事,考生还需丰富话题背景知识,并不断练习,定会大有改进。

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