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5月6日雅思大作文范文“青少年犯罪应不应该接受和成年人同样的惩罚”

2017-05-08 03:31:51 来源:北外网课

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Young people who commit serious crimes, such as robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adult.

To what extent you agree or disagree?

犯重罪的年轻人(例如抢劫或暴力袭击)应该被以和成年人同样的方式惩罚

同意/不同意

(2017.05.06)

雅思大作文范文青少年犯罪



Sample Writing:

Teenager delinquency is becoming an increasing concern. Some people claim that only lenient sentences can not curb the major crimes, therefore, their punishment should not be differentiated from the adults. However, I can not totally agree to this.


teenager delinquency 青少年犯罪

lenient 宽大的

sentence 判刑

curb 控制,使…停止

major crime 重罪

differentiate from把…区别开来

oppose to 反对


Those who support the same fixed sentence towards both youth and grown-ups argue that without harsh punishment, juveniles would not realize the serious after effect of their behaviour and leave the victims and their families suffering. Simply, the best solution is to treat them like the adult if the crimes they commit are every bit as heinous as adult.


fixed sentence 固定的刑罚

harsh 严厉的

victim 受害者

every bit 完全,每一点

heinous 可憎的


However, adolescents do not have the same physical and mental condition as adult, so applying the same penalty is not reasonable for all situations. The causalities of high criminal rate of teenager rooted deeply in the social environment- family and media influences for example. As the young, some of them are naturally daring and knows no boundaries. If the media presents violent actions as cool, then young people may regard gangster as hero, gain sense of powerful and develop big ego by bullying others or commit severe crimes like robbery or a violent attacks as a result. To radically settle the problem, morals should be taught and the positive way to show off strength should be presented on TV more.


penalty 惩罚

causality 因果关系

gangster 暴徒

ego 自我,自负

radically 根本上,彻底地

morals 道德

show off 展示,炫耀


Another reason I think juvenile offenders should not be tried and punished as adult is that there is a chance for rehabilitation. However violent crimes they committed, with alternative ways of punishment or easier sentence, there is much greater possibility for them to reestablish the value, return to normal life and even shift gears to become leader of certain area. Compared with adult criminals, the young ones are more capable of learning from their mistakes. Once they understand the consequences of their behaviour and realize their desired goal of life, they rehabilitate much faster. Conversely, if they are punished the same way as adult, chances are that they become repeat criminals or serial offenders, since they are taught more criminal techniques and their identity of criminal is strengthened when captured in jail.


offender 违法者

rehabilitation 复原

alternative 替代性的

chances are that 有可能是

repeat criminals 累犯罪

serial offenders 连续犯罪者

identity 身份


Although based on rule of justice, heinous acts should be punished regardless of the age, for sake of long term benefit, collaborative efforts of the whole society should be taken to save the juvenile offenders by every possible solution except for equivalent penalty as adult in many instances.


for sake of 为了

collaborative efforts 共同努力

equivalent 相等的

in many instances 在多数情况下


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